Pleht swiftly uses the platter to knock the bucket off Brudil's body (with "CLANG!" SFX). He removes the platter (the panel springing with "CLICK!" SFX). As Brudil is about to lift the lid, we see the Red Slugfolk charging forward with Brudil's rusty axe.

28 – Reheaded

I tried to have this and the next page in one, but it felt unfocused. I needed to get both Brudil getting reattached and the Slugfolk waking up and attacking conveyed, but the way it was progressing looked crowded and confused. This has happened a couple of times before, but this one felt the most egregious to me for some reason.

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